Judy McLain
1 min readJul 13, 2019

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Wonderful story. I like how a husband’s love and compassion for his uncomfortable and very pregnant wife sends him to the street in the middle of the night and how his embarrassment over his purchase leads him astray. The way you craft a story is awesome. I especially like the details — the cashier’s and the hipster’s matching finger nail polish. The husband’s curiosity over the robbery accessories. Awesome!

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Judy McLain
Judy McLain

Written by Judy McLain

Shit Creek survivor. Storyteller. Feminist liberal. Southern without the accent. Chihuahuaist.

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